Pouring his heart into the words he wrote on the first page of that novel
” Always to you… who smell like life… and own the scent of all the others…” She always believed that books are the gift of wisdom and true feelings; and always treasured a book that starts with a dedication.
"I could be a phase in your life, and you will meet people who would impress you more, I am just a simple man".
"I know I will" she said with a smile. "But you must also know that, no one would be like you".
She loved the simplest little details about him, his walk and how different he is from everything she ever thought she wants, his hair with the shining grey hairs in between, and his true charming smile.
In bed that night, she was full of him, closed her eyes on the quietness she had inside, and she realized that what she loves the most is the peace he brought into her…
11 comments:
Beautiful, flowing, lyrical, romantic! Since I am new to your corner, forgive me for asking, is this YOU writing, or are you quoting? It's lovely. Such joy of language!
I love that last paragraph!
Marvin, thanks for your admiration,its a pleasure to me!
Yes, it's me writing,when there is ANYTHING quoted.. i usually tell, but its rare that I do!
Its all mine :)
Asoom.. :) Thanks, I love that part too..
You are MOST talented! ;-)
Hayat, the last paragraph is nice indeed, so who is the one who brings peace to you? ;)
Marvin.. :) Thank you so much!
Ali.. this is the last paragraph here.. but it is int the last in all! More is coming soon..
And my peace.. comes within ;)
I hope this is coming from a personal experience.If yes,then hold on to it really tight,you can feel like this only once if you are lucky that is ..
If not, then good luck :)
amazing !! I'm officially addicted :)
"....and how different he is from everything she ever thought she wants...."
This one I could relate to the most, it's funny how we spend our whole lives listing things we want in our future spouse and then we end up falling for someone who is completely different.
Lovely as usual
Like Asma said, the last paragraph is simply awesome!
"I could be a phase in your life, and you will meet people who would impress you more, I am just a simple man".
i liked this part alot ,simple but meaningfull
greetings
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